User talk:SWRULS

Welcome to StrategyWiki!
Hello SWRULS! Welcome to StrategyWiki. Thank you for your contributions. If you have any questions, just contact a sysop through their talk page or post on the staff lounge, and they'd be happy to help. If you need help editing, check the StrategyWiki Guide. If you have a question about the content on this wiki, you can check out our staff lounge page. If you want to ask questions or hang out in IRC, we're usually around. On the other hand, if you have ideas for StrategyWiki, bring them up on the community portal talk page. Please remember to sign your name on talk pages by clicking or using four tildes (    ); this will automatically produce your name and the date. Finally, please do your best to always fill in the edit summary field as this helps to document all of your hard work. Feel free to delete this message from your talk page if you like, or keep it for reference. Happy editing! -- Rocky (Talk - Contributions) 14:01, 26 June 2007 (CDT)

Writing Style
Hi SWRULS. Please don't take this as nitpicking, but rather as constructive criticism. Try to avoid asking the reader questions, as though you were having some kind of conversation with them. It is OK to ask questions for the sake of illustrating a collection of choices that the reader may be faced with, or recounting what parts of the story have not yet been wrapped up, but it's generally not advisable to include "right?" or "remember?" throughout your walkthroughs. Someone will go through what you've written and remove them at some point, so try to avoid doing it in the future. Other than that, keep up the great work. Procyon (Talk) 14:43, 26 June 2007 (CDT)