User talk:Metatoast

Welcome to StrategyWiki!
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Sometimes, less is more.
Hi Metatoast. First, thanks for expanding the Brock strategy section. You did a good job, in the sense that everything you wrote is detailed and technically correct. The only thing I would counsel you to be careful of is inundating the reader with too much information. I don't think that you necessarily did this here, but remember to keep your audience in mind when writing. Some people want details, while others want to quickly look up the information they need and continue playing. If you bury the information, that can make it difficult for people to find what they're looking for. If nothing else, add section headers so people can scan them and find the information that is most pertinent to them. Thanks very much. Procyon (Talk) 11:16, 30 April 2008 (CDT)