Talk:Spectrobes/Kollin

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What does everyone think of this page? To date, I have typed everything in it. I want to hear some input, because I'm still new to Strategy Wiki. Enjoy,Myth 14:33, 18 May 2007 (CDT)

Hi again! Since I know squat about Spectrobes, this is going to be in a completely formatting viewpoint:

Do not use "I" or "me." Period. If you can re-work the page to not include it, you can probably remove the drivel template as well.
Make liberal use of wiki markup, the markup language that helps us format pages. If you want to see a good example of a well laid-out page, check it out here. It has the following items in it that makes it such a good example:
- Headings
- Images
- Links
- A footer nav
- An Header Nav (which this article has)
- Well-written content
- A well-laid out boss section (Aftermath could use a bit of cleanup though)
- Separate boxes for sidequests and such (not sure if this game has any, but that is a good way to distinguish them)
Use controller button templates to produce button images so you can say "hold " or "press or +" instead of "hold the A button" or "press R or L+A." (click "Edit" to see how it is done)

These were all the things I can think of off the top of my head (you may want to check out Meta's help page on wiki markup for a more rigorous chart of what does what. --Ryan Schmidt^{Talk - Contribs} 15:30, 18 May 2007 (CDT)

Well, seeing as I own the game, what you have of the walkthrough so far I good. I like it. As stated by Ryan, please, Please, PLEASE do not use a first person account while writing a walkthrough, page, anything. Trust me, I have had to clean up a page using a first person account, and it isn't very fun. Aside from what you need to work on, this is a good start to the walkthrough. Lunar Knight ^{(Talk to me + Contribs)} 17:55, 18 May 2007 (CDT)

[edit] Thank you

Thank you for your input, both of you. As for Ryan, I went back and changed the FPPOV(first-person point-of-view). Thanks for the reference,too. As for the Lunar Knight, I am glad it is accurate (I haven't played for a while, so I had to write most of it from memory). Someone changed my buttons for me, and told me how I could do it myself. Thanks again to both of you, I enjoy your input as I want to know what needs to be improved, and dislike being left in the dark. I am still learning how to create tables and such, so it would be very much appreciated if you could help me some more with that. Sincerely,Myth 22:46, 18 May 2007 (CDT)

[edit] Much completed!!!!!!

I am happy to announce that I have added several paragraphs to the Spectrobes/Kolin article! I have completed the museum part, and I am going to finish the rest of Kollin: The Third Planet soon! I am not saying that it is error free, so please feel free to look it over to check for spelling and such. Just wanted to note of my accomplishments! Sincerely and Joyfully, Myth 23:21, 18 May 2007 (CDT)

I am happy to announce that I have completed the Kollin article!!!!!!!! I will try and work on the Ziba, Himuro, Genshi, and Meido articles as well, though I am sorry to say that I cannot do a Nessa article because I have beaten the game. I will, though, if I find someone who hasn't beaten the game. It would be much appreciated if someone could work on the Daichi and Nessa articles. Sincerely, with much completion, Myth 12:03, 19 May 2007 (CDT)

[edit] Planet Mispelling

By the way, I noticed that on the table of contents the planet Kollin is mispelled "Kolin". I looked in my game, and it is spelled with two l's. But I can't edit the titles of the table of contents. Does anyone know how to fix that?? Sincerely,Myth 12:05, 19 May 2007 (CDT)

I'll fix this for you, it requires moving a few pages and you need a sysop to delete the redirects.--Rocky