Talk:Super Paper Mario/Chapter 1: Lineland

1 long paragraph is difficult to follow

I think that this page was much clearer as of revision #271852 (2008-05-27). Perhaps it should go back to multiple paragraphs per chapter?

Definitely needs multiple paragraphs instead of those walls-of-text in each section, but we don't need to do it with the subsections from the older version. Also, this should be a new edit, not a revert back to the old version, because we don't want to lose any good edits in the intervening revisions.

tl;dr: just need a few line breaks in those big paragraphs for readability. - najzere 19:47, 24 February 2009 (UTC)