Too Brief?
While this is an informative page, (for example the strategy on how to beat Parasite Queen is very good) it does seem a shame that it summerizes the Space Frigate. I think a long game like Metroid Prime needs a little more explanation The secondary mission of scanning things is also missed out (For example on the Space Frigate there are 3 one time only scans that are not mentioned). I have not just edited the main article as this is obviously someone else's project but perhaps it would be a good idea to ask yourself "What would make people want to read this more than all the others one the net?" If you can answer this posistivly, then you are on the right track.
Added Content
I decided to delete any brief mention of scans in the original text and included a more detailed section called "Available Scans" I also added a heading called Boss Battle: The Parasite Queen. This should hopefully make it easier for anyone who just wants to find out how to defeat a boss. If anyone disagrees with what I have done I will be happy to hear thier views.